The Cub

Let loose your artistic flair! No Rules except please keep shots within 380K & 2000 pixels wide.

The Cub

Postby Double_Farvel » Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:03 pm

I am quite happy with this one although compression was an issue. Please click link for better quality (I think i did it right). C & C always appreciated!

Image

Mods, not sure if this is allowed but here is the link...


[img=http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/5769/hawaiicubcw0.th.jpg]
Image
User avatar
Double_Farvel
Major
Major
 
Posts: 1073
Joined: Fri Aug 11, 2006 5:06 am
Location: New Jersey, USA

Re: The Cub

Postby fighter25 » Wed Apr 11, 2007 7:24 pm

Wow, looks really good!  [smiley=thumbsup.gif]Your edits are getting better! Keep at it!
Image
fighter25
Major
Major
 
Posts: 1180
Joined: Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:50 pm
Location: Dayton, Ohio

Re: The Cub

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:50 pm

[quote]Wow, looks really good!
Image
User avatar
Double_Farvel
Major
Major
 
Posts: 1073
Joined: Fri Aug 11, 2006 5:06 am
Location: New Jersey, USA

Re: The Cub

Postby krigl » Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:07 pm

This is a real beauty, very colourful, bright and real looking. A great composite!
If you're bored of an evening - and you'll have to be - you can check out my screenshot gallery: Kriglsflightsimscreens...HERE

[center][img]http://www.simviation.com/phpup
krigl
Lieutenant Colonel
Lieutenant Colonel
 
Posts: 8234
Joined: Fri Jun 10, 2005 3:47 am

Re: The Cub

Postby cloud9 » Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:52 pm

Well, I'll just be honest. IMHO the aircraft looks quite stuck. Maybe try softly blurring the edges. Also it's as if the colors are too vibrant. Try dulling down the background and the cub a bit. Trust me I know how hard it is too get critisism like this when you think that it's one of your best, so I'm sorry, but I hope this will lead to even better edits in the future ;)
[center]Image
My system
: Antec 900 : Intel Q6600 OC'd 3.0 GHz : 680i : 512 MB Nvidia GeForce 8800 GTS : 4 GB 800MHz DDR2 : 250 GB HD : OCZ 600W : Vista x64 : Thermaltake 120 :[/c
User avatar
cloud9
Major
Major
 
Posts: 1680
Joined: Wed Nov 09, 2005 9:06 am
Location: CRAZY!!!! :D

Re: The Cub

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu Apr 12, 2007 7:59 pm

Well, I'll just be honest. IMHO the aircraft looks quite stuck. Maybe try softly blurring the edges. Also it's as if the colors are too vibrant. Try dulling down the background and the cub a bit. Trust me I know how hard it is too get critisism like this when you think that it's one of your best, so I'm sorry, but I hope this will lead to even better edits in the future ;)


No problem cloud9. I look for use criticism in future edits.  ;)
Image
User avatar
Double_Farvel
Major
Major
 
Posts: 1073
Joined: Fri Aug 11, 2006 5:06 am
Location: New Jersey, USA

Re: The Cub

Postby Sytse » Fri Apr 13, 2007 7:40 am

Getting better! Next time, try to use a less beautiful background, because this one draws all the attention away from the plane.  ;)
User avatar
Sytse
Major
Major
 
Posts: 3397
Joined: Fri Jun 24, 2005 5:26 am
Location: The Netherlands


Return to Edited Screenshots

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 684 guests