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Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 10:37 pm
by cloud9
Just an quick edit I did.

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Lemme know how I can improve ;)

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:10 am
by CSM
i like it very subtle very noice  8-)

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:05 pm
by NDSP
The plane is a little blurred  :-/

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 8:11 pm
by TheletterR
The heat blur is good, but the front of the plane (I don't know if you blurred it yourself or not)
is too fuzzy.

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 12:56 pm
by flyboy_14
The heat blur is good, but the front of the plane (I don't know if you blurred it yourself or not)
is too fuzzy.



I have to disagree about the heat blur. You would not see heat blur like that in the air. Really only around the ground.  Other wise its an amazing picture!!

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:46 pm
by krigl
It's cool, but yes, heat blur in the air perhaps only  with a jet fighter or something, and even then I don't know if that would be accurate....also you look fairly low, so I'd expect to see the nose up a bit more, and some flaps or something....maybe I'm wrong?

Nice work though, keep 'em coming!

Re: Just a Subtle Attempt

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:01 pm
by Sytse
I agree about the heat blur. It looks pretty nice, but it isn't realistic in this situation. You would be able to see some if it was a jet fighter, as Krigl stated, but only at high throttle levels. The rest of the pic looks ok to me, except the composition. The plane is all the way up in the left corner. It's not good to position the plane on the horizon and right in the middle, but this is also too extreme. I'd lower the plane a bit and drag it to the right a bit. After that you can also loose a big part of the water to bring the plane more into focus. After all, it is the main subject...;)