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"Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 6:31 pm
by cloud9
I wasn't entirely sure about this one :-?

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Let me know your opinion ;)

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 7:29 pm
by krigl
Blends in nicely IMHO, though it would be 747 sized if it were actually flying round the edge of that hill...

Composites: so hard to make, so  easy to criticise  ::) :-[

At first sight it  looks great, love the plane and background... just that shoulder of hill detracts a little... nice work mate!!!

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 7:29 pm
by Ravang
It looks good, but the lights look kind of weird :)

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:57 pm
by cloud9
Thanks for the comments and Krigl, I noticed that but didn't do anything at first *slaps cloud9 for idiocy* ;D

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Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:30 pm
by krigl
It does look more natural now  :) The only strange thing is perhaps the nav lights, otherwise I could believe the shot's real... 8-)

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:10 pm
by cloud9
Yeah I fixed that and other minor issues in the one for the gallery nominations

Here it is:

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Thats it I promise ;D

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 7:45 am
by Double_Farvel
Try adding some dodge to the nav lights. They still look a bit dark.

Re: "Showing Her Wear"

PostPosted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:36 pm
by krigl
Try adding some dodge to the nav lights. They still look a bit dark.


They do but otherwise this is now a GREAT shot, nice work indeed!!!!

I like how you've made it 6 by 8 or thereabouts, yet I