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For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:12 pm
by cloud9
My second try. I know that the shadow is off but oh well.

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Lemme know if this one's better

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:56 pm
by ThatOnePerson
Much better! And nice job on the props (something I still struggle with, but that doesn't leave the forums ;D)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:57 pm
by FTL992
Very nice I like this edit a lot!  ;D

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 12:19 am
by BAW0343
So the shadow... Its upside down,  however if its a reflection its good but should be between the plane and camera. i.e. move it down farther and add some color.  ;D  Other then the shadow awesome edit  8-)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:36 am
by an-225
Its beautiful! I would have left out the shadow though...but its still beautiful! Makes those prop planes look fast...like they should. ;)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 4:21 am
by krigl
It's cool, but yes, the shadow - take it away!  :)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:36 am
by Sytse
And after you take out the shadow, you can cut of 1/2 of the water, to bring the plane more into focus. The plane could be a bit bigger too. Anyway, the background needs more contrast, or the plane needs less, or both... Good job on the props!  :)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:47 pm
by cloud9
REDO!!!!

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Lemme know ;)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:18 am
by an-225
MUCH BETTER. ;)

Re: For My Next Trick

PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:58 pm
by FSGT Gabe
#2 looks awesome...great edit there :o.

- Kevin :D