For My Next Trick

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For My Next Trick

Postby cloud9 » Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:12 pm

My second try. I know that the shadow is off but oh well.

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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby ThatOnePerson » Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:56 pm

Much better! And nice job on the props (something I still struggle with, but that doesn't leave the forums ;D)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby FTL992 » Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:57 pm

Very nice I like this edit a lot!  ;D
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby BAW0343 » Mon Mar 05, 2007 12:19 am

So the shadow... Its upside down,  however if its a reflection its good but should be between the plane and camera. i.e. move it down farther and add some color.  ;D  Other then the shadow awesome edit  8-)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby an-225 » Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:36 am

Its beautiful! I would have left out the shadow though...but its still beautiful! Makes those prop planes look fast...like they should. ;)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby krigl » Mon Mar 05, 2007 4:21 am

It's cool, but yes, the shadow - take it away!  :)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby Sytse » Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:36 am

And after you take out the shadow, you can cut of 1/2 of the water, to bring the plane more into focus. The plane could be a bit bigger too. Anyway, the background needs more contrast, or the plane needs less, or both... Good job on the props!  :)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby cloud9 » Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:47 pm

REDO!!!!

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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby an-225 » Tue Mar 06, 2007 1:18 am

MUCH BETTER. ;)
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Re: For My Next Trick

Postby FSGT Gabe » Tue Mar 06, 2007 2:58 pm

#2 looks awesome...great edit there :o.

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