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Country flyin'

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:15 pm
by Double_Farvel
Here is a recent edit of mine.

Re: Country flyin'

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:22 pm
by Sytse
Nice pic. There are a few things that could need some work though.

1. The perspective on the plane looks disorted. Perhaps your zoom level was below 1.00?
2. The perspective on the prop looks off. It looks like both blades are bended forward.
3. The top of the nose area looks weird. I'm aware of the fact that you don't have the perfect tools for cutting out the plane, but I've seen better from you.
4. The plane looks a bit flat. The bottom of the fuselage could use some shading to make it look more 3D. Some highlights wouldn't go amiss either.
5. (small detail) I think you should draw in the antenna line, from the spine behind the cockpit to the top of the tail.

I think you're doing really well on your edits and this picture has a great set up. If you could do something about the above mentioned points, this could be an awesome picture.  :)

Re: Country flyin'

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 10:10 pm
by Double_Farvel
Thanks for all the tips. I hopefully will continue to improve.  ;)

Re: Country flyin'

PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 11:16 pm
by Jared
I love the colors and perspective! :)