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Dodging the Storm

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 4:49 pm
by Double_Farvel
Please leave a comment...good or bad. I wish to improve

Re: Dodging the Storm

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 4:53 pm
by BFMF
Not bad ;)

Re: Dodging the Storm

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 5:08 pm
by LVA157
You're getting better everytime i see your shots... :)

If i was you i'd try and experiment with adding some other effects, such as heat blur, wingtip vortices, missiles, that sort of thing!... ;)

Re: Dodging the Storm

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 5:30 pm
by krigl
It's a nice pic, and I can imagine how much effort goes in to cutting those buggers out. Just don't have time for it, myself.

Improvements?  I agree with LVA but for me the basic problem is that they don't seem to blend with the background. But I don't know how to  blend them...they seem 'stuck on' -  perhaps someone else has some tips.

Re: Dodging the Storm

PostPosted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 9:08 pm
by Immelman
Very nice, i love the lighting and the planes.  As for making them look like part of the picture, the background is grainy so maybe if you added some film grain to the planes it might look a little better.  Of course i havent tried it dont know if it would work, but its a suggestion.  Great job.