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Foggy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:22 pm
by Immelman
This is my first real attempt at a composition.

Re: Foggy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:22 pm
by Sytse
Looks nice. The colours could use some attention for better blending, but it's not too bad. But, why hide the plane in the corner?

Re: Foggy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm
by Immelman
That came from paying too much attention to the small details.  I was thinking that it would look like the plane was higher, otherwise it might look too low.  I know, stupid.

Re: Foggy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm
by matt2190
That looks very nice.

Re: Foggy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 9:38 pm
by Jared
looking pretty good

Re: Foggy

PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:17 am
by beaky
I think it's fine.
Composition means sometimes having your subject off-center; the hills in the opposite corner balance it nicely.