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Foggy

Posted:
Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:22 pm
by Immelman
This is my first real attempt at a composition.
Re: Foggy

Posted:
Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:22 pm
by Sytse
Looks nice. The colours could use some attention for better blending, but it's not too bad. But, why hide the plane in the corner?
Re: Foggy

Posted:
Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm
by Immelman
That came from paying too much attention to the small details. I was thinking that it would look like the plane was higher, otherwise it might look too low. I know, stupid.
Re: Foggy

Posted:
Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm
by matt2190
That looks very nice.
Re: Foggy

Posted:
Sun Jan 07, 2007 9:38 pm
by Jared
looking pretty good
Re: Foggy

Posted:
Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:17 am
by beaky
I think it's fine.
Composition means sometimes having your subject off-center; the hills in the opposite corner balance it nicely.