My second attempt

Posted:
Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:06 pm
by Bad_at_FS
This is my second attempt at editing... my first attempt was MUCH better.... (
http://www.simviation.com/cgi-bin/yabb2 ... 1167406251)
But, anyway, here it is!

Sadly, my computer has a program called "Picture It!" not photoshop.....
Re: My second attempt

Posted:
Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:54 pm
by VVM
for a second attempt, its...not bad. i think you were going for the sense of speed with the blur? for that to work, the background ned to blur in a direction i.e left to right, top to bottom etc. i found the shout kinda messed with my eyes, and i found it hard to focus on the 'sharp' image (the a/c) in the middle. drop by studioV if you have any questions...im sure someone will be able to give you better advice. i am pretty new to editing myself...i have only edited 3 shots so far.
Re: My second attempt

Posted:
Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:05 pm
by flymo
nice try for a 2nd attempt
but, as vavavoon said u need to add some motion blur to the scenery e.g. the background. i would recomend a top to bottom motion blur
john