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Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:54 pm
by EirePlane
Just a simple edit of one of my own paint schemes

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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:11 pm
by flyboy 28
Is that light on top supposed to be the sun?

If so, I'd suggest putting lighter colors around the top of it. It's not very often see red, red, red, sun, black! ;)


Just some constructive criticizm. :)

Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:58 pm
by EirePlane
light on top was just supposed to be some lens flare where the light hit something shiny, i suppose i could do without it  :)

Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 3:09 pm
by flyboy 28
Ah okay. Just drop it down so it connects to the tail. ;)

Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 6:29 pm
by GunnerMan
Looks good but I agree lower the flare intensity or burn some of it out. Put a sun either rendered or real in the lower right corner so it looks like its  setting and you will have a winner. Not something I would have done on one of my own edits but I do get many "visions" from other peoples work.  ;D

Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:17 pm
by Sytse
oooh! I thought that was the beacon light there! lol

Re: Tail Shot at dusk

PostPosted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 5:30 am
by Flt.Lt.Andrew
Thats excellent, looks quite artistic, as opposed to photgraphic, which is a good thing! You've done well.


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