Olde Time Spitfire

This shot was suppost to be the last scene in the movie right before the creadits roll.
".....and our hero makes it off just in time, never to be bothered again..."

This is one of my best edits by far, so what do you think?
".....and our hero makes it off just in time, never to be bothered again..."

This is one of my best edits by far, so what do you think?