a Corsair flying CAP

[Maenhatia]

A Corsair taking off to fly his daily CAP.



After some minutes he detected two incoming Zero's from the north.



He tried too shoot down the first Zero, but he got away.

[Maenhatia]

After some feared moments I succesfully shot down the first Zero.



But I totally forgot his wingman, who was closing in, coming too get me.



He managed to get on my tail and I couldn't shake him.

[Maenhatia]

He hitted me more and more, and then, the final explosion as a result.



My aircraft was on fire, and there was no way to get control of it again.



See here the result when you don't pay attention to the wingman of the enemy.

[Maenhatia]

Luckily I had found a way to jump out of my plane. Else I wouldn't sit here sharing my story to you guys.

Hope you liked it. It was my first story and if you liked it more will come. Also, I'm always open for some critism, so if you have something that needs to be a bit better, feel free to post it here.

Happy hunting,

Maenhatia

[Bombardier101]

Good shots

No critisism, but some of your shots won't load

[Theis]

very nice shots there!

[Maenhatia]

very nice shots there!

I know, I still don't know why.. ahh well.

Thanks

[Sytse]

read the rules  ;)