Trying some things out

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Trying some things out

Postby fighter25 » Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:18 pm

Well I did a composite today. Spent 3 hours on it. There are some major issues but I was mostly trying to perfect my canopy and cutouts.
I won't let compression ruin it so here's a photobucket link. :P
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x138/fighter35/USAFMflyinf16f25cmposte.jpg
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Re: Trying some things out

Postby chrism7262 » Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:24 pm

very nice job!!  ;D anything with an F-16 is good IMO! the only thing i might suggest is to reduce the blur on the wingtip a little bit and maybe try to make the canopy a little bit darker. these are mior things though..great job m8!!  ;D  :D
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Re: Trying some things out

Postby a1 » Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:21 pm

Pretty good. Well done. ;)
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Re: Trying some things out

Postby fighter25 » Sun Jan 06, 2008 5:35 pm

Thanks guys. I guess I'll go and rebuild that wing tip missle sometime. I does look kinda bad.
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Re: Trying some things out

Postby chrism7262 » Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:47 pm

nooo doesnt look bad at all!! love the shot and the perspective is awesome!! great shot!!  ;D  ;)
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Re: Trying some things out

Postby spitfire boy » Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:31 am

Fantastic!! Only one thing I would say is to try to make the line between heat blur and normal ground less defined and more gradual - right now there's quite a sharp line between the two. Minor niggle. ;)
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