Teamwork

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Teamwork

Postby NDSP » Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:18 am

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Not sure whats wrong with it, but something doesn't seem right... anyways I did my best to try to resemble a formation


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Re: Teamwork

Postby mustang666 » Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:30 am

Nice work Nick :)  it's either the cloud edges or the closeness of the formation given that they're already rolling into the break.  Perhaps another 10ft (relative to the Raptors') apart and it would look like a realistic formation.  Or a tiny heading change on the rolling birds.  That's just my opinion and as it stands it's a good pic. ;) :-X
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Re: Teamwork

Postby Kleen Harry » Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:04 pm

Heeeeeey! Nice one, Nick! :)

Mustang6 is really good at formation images. I would definitely follow his advice on the subject!  ;)
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Re: Teamwork

Postby chrism7262 » Sun Aug 26, 2007 4:59 pm

nice one1! i agree with mustang turning the two that are breaking a little more toward the outside i think would do it and maybe spreading them out a bit like he said.

great job though!!  ;D
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