by Sytse » Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:22 pm
Nice pic. There are a few things that could need some work though.
1. The perspective on the plane looks disorted. Perhaps your zoom level was below 1.00?
2. The perspective on the prop looks off. It looks like both blades are bended forward.
3. The top of the nose area looks weird. I'm aware of the fact that you don't have the perfect tools for cutting out the plane, but I've seen better from you.
4. The plane looks a bit flat. The bottom of the fuselage could use some shading to make it look more 3D. Some highlights wouldn't go amiss either.
5. (small detail) I think you should draw in the antenna line, from the spine behind the cockpit to the top of the tail.
I think you're doing really well on your edits and this picture has a great set up. If you could do something about the above mentioned points, this could be an awesome picture. :)
