My second attempt

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My second attempt

Postby Bad_at_FS » Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:06 pm

This is my second attempt at editing... my first attempt was MUCH better.... (http://www.simviation.com/cgi-bin/yabb2 ... 1167406251)
But, anyway, here it is!
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Sadly, my computer has a program called "Picture It!" not photoshop.....
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Re: My second attempt

Postby VVM » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:54 pm

for a second attempt, its...not bad.  i think you were going for the sense of speed with the blur?  for that to work, the background ned to blur in a direction i.e left to right, top to bottom etc.  i found the shout kinda messed with my eyes, and i found it hard to focus on the 'sharp' image (the a/c) in the middle.  drop by studioV if you have any questions...im sure someone will be able to give you better advice.  i am pretty new to editing myself...i have only edited 3 shots so far.
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Re: My second attempt

Postby flymo » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:05 pm

nice try for a 2nd attempt

but, as vavavoon said u need to add some motion blur to the scenery e.g. the background. i would recomend a top to bottom motion blur

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