My First one!!

[alrot]

This is my first work,It hasn't finish yetOh right?...

PLEASE COMPARE THIS IMAGE WITH THIS OTHERhere hit ( AIRLINERS.NET)

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[Airshow_lover]

looks like you have a lighting issue

[Travis]

Not lighting, exactly.  I would recommend you select all the polys in the exterior and autosmooth them.  There are a few sections that are a little warped from cutting things out (like the cockpit windows).

Also, try pulling the edges of the main panel toward the seats.  The edges seem to be hidden behind the cockpit walls, and that's what's giving you jaggies as well as the disappearing poly trick in the cockpit.  I'm really liking that VC detail.  Getting to be a little more proficient, are we?

[alrot]

Locke this shot I toked in 16 bit in the game ,I mean 1024x 720 16bits by mistaken I use like this because it runs better, I already test in 32bit and that scrachy dissapears,besides when I put the map or when i texturise it in 16b it dissapear.This shot are without any texture

[Jakemaster]

Wow alrot thats looking great, especially for a first project.  I  cant even figure out how to use Gmax and youve already got this!  

It seems to me like with some good (photoreal) textures this could be an amazing plane!

Keep up the great work!

[alrot]

[quote]Wow alrot thats looking great, especially for a first project.

[Jakemaster]

Thanks Jake ,Yeah I being thinking about to paste a photoreal,I mean using photography parts,BTW its easier for me Im not good in drawing,Thanks for that advise buddy....Do you have any airline suggestion?That use & have the dc9 or b717 a lot?
cheers

The only airline I can think of that uses 717s is AirTran, but Ill look for some for ya

[Jakemaster]

Ah, one that would be nice is Midwest Airlines, lovely blue http://www.airliners.net/open.file/1026671/M/

[alrot]

Thanks Jake.!

[Mr.Mugel]

Cool ! A 717 with VC, looking good Alrot !

[avp_bluearmy]

looks good man, hey, i am controling th designing forum!!!!  ;D

[rootbeer]

The cockpit in the link has too much detail...